-better focus on shot.
- shots of the mac computers are needed within the visuals, along with more visuals needed.
- if you don't have enough footage - DONT DRAG OUT.
- Melanie was talking about herself too much.
- students personal opinions on why they are here and their future references are to be included.
- shots were shared around on both inserts.
HEALTH AND SOCIAL CARE:
- see what's on the paper ( focus).
- shot of the other campus.
- follow the rules of the college; no hoods
In GENERAL; editing.
CS - more footage needed > clients know that the footage couldn't be rendered on the day fully. TECHNICAL DIFFICULTIES.
ABLA - leave the caption on for a longer period of time. ( ask about the font)
The advantages;
The music was good overall on both parts.
It was very realistic and visual.
To be done;
Permission slips for filming those with a disability on the other campus.
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